Say What You Mean...

...and mean what you say. I was recently told that I have found my "voice" in my writing. Apparently it's sort of punchy--short sentences, sometimes fragments, that get my point across in a fairly simple way. Kind of like how I talk. I was pleased to hear that opinion, which I consider high praise, but it is probably not altogether deserved. I've got a long way to go in my writing.

I came across this quote on another site and thought I'd lift it right over for your enjoyment. On writing well:

C. S. Lewis advice to a teenager:

1. Always try to use the language so as to make quite clear what you mean and make sure your sentence couldn't mean anything else.

2. Always prefer the clean direct word to the long, vague one. Don’t implement promises, but keep them.

3. Never use abstract nouns when concrete ones will do. If you mean “More people died” don’t say “Mortality rose.”

4. In writing, don’t use adjectives which merely tell us how you want us to feel about the things you are describing. I mean, instead of telling us the thing is “terrible,” describe it so that we’ll be terrified. Don’t say it was “delightful”; make us say “delightful” when we’ve read the description. You see, all those words (horrifying, wonderful, hideous, exquisite) are only like saying to your readers “Please, will you do my job for me.”

5. Don’t use words too big for the subject. Don’t say “infinitely” when you mean “very”; otherwise you’ll have no word left when you want to talk about something really infinite.

Letter from June 26, 1956, quoted in Wayne Martindale and Jerry Root, eds., The Quotable Lewis (Wheaton, Ill.: Tyndale, 1989), 623.